高考英语写作学习为25分,占总分数的16%。如果作文分数能达到20分以上,就能轻松将许多考生甩在后面。
英文作文的阅卷老师阅读速度很快,每篇作文以平均不到一分钟的速度审核,阅卷老师首先会大致读一下作文内容,并在心里给出作文得分的等级。一等分数为20-25分;二等分数为15分-19分;三等分数为15分以下。因此,整篇作文的第一印象很重要。
1.卷面清爽,减少修改
卷面整洁的高考作文分数一般都不会太低,阅卷老师喜好阅读字迹工整的文章,让人看上去舒服的卷面,应尽量减少修改,如果字体优美的话就更占优势了。
2.杜绝错误拼写
高考作文应杜绝拼写错误的单词,尤其是简单的词汇。如果考生有拿不准的单词应尽量替换为熟悉的单词。如果有拼写错误的单词不仅会因此扣分,还会影响整体作文分数的等级。
3.善用实词,替换常用词
高考英语作文应多用实词,少用虚词。比如在形容一个人很好的时候,不要总用nice这样太过简单空洞的词汇。应尽量多使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted之类的形容词。
作文不能拿高分,很大的原因是,千篇一律。所以,在写作时,用不一样的词来表达,这样能给你的作文增加不少的新鲜感与分数。
动词替换
Improve 加强:
advance;promote 促进;enhance;reinforce.
change 改变:
transform 多指改头换面,完全改变
emphasize 强调:
highlight
highlight/emphase the significance magnitude of... 强调...的重要性;
stress;accentuate;address。
develop 培养:
cultivate cultivate the ability of...培养情操;
nurture 养育,同样可以指培养人才
break 破坏:
impair impair ability主要是破坏能力,莫乱用;
undermine 抽象意义上的破坏,逐渐削弱之意;
devastate 特指毁灭,蹂躏。
keep 保存:
preserve、conserve 保护资源用的就是这个词,protect 保护具体的东西。
deal with 解决:
tackle tackle the problem;
resolve 解决争论、冲突、危机,比较正式。
need 需要:
require;call for.
形容词替换
everywhere 普遍的:
widespread;prevalent;
overflow 泛滥;
rampant 特指有害的东西泛滥,比如疾病、犯罪等,并且难以控制。
good 好的(太多了):
impressive;glorious;amazing;brilliant;incredible;attractive;
advantageous 特指有益的。
harmful 有害的:
unfavorable;horrible;disgusting;inhumance 没人性的。
rich 富有的:
wealthy;affluent;ample。
serious 严重的:
severe.
obvious 明显的:
manifest;apparent;evident;patent.
cheap 便宜的
economical 经济的,不浪费,而不是单纯指某物便宜;
reasonable 价格合理的;
affordable 能够支付的。
名词替换
forefather 祖先:
ancestor;predecessor.
difference 不同:
gap 沟;distinction;schism.
crime 犯罪:
delinquency;
criminal act 犯罪行为。
environment 环境:
circumstance 相当抽象的词,情况;surrounding 表示周围居住环境,相当具体,nearby可与之互换;
atmosphere、ambience这两个词可替换,但是当atmosphere表示大气层时则不能。
pollution 污染:
contamination.
human 人类:
individual;men;ones以及一切表示工人、农民工、公务员等等的词。
humanity:特别指出,用来表示人性。其他一概不要用。
in modern society 在当今社会:
in contemporary society;
in this day and age.
4.巧用连词改长句
高考作文中如果长句的连词应用得当,会成为加分的亮点。常用的连词有以下几个:
表递进关系:furthermore, what is more
表转折:however/but 但是
表对比:not that …but that…不是…而是…/ one hand….on the other hand一方面…另一 方面…/ unlike…与…不同/not so much….as…与其…不如…
表目的:for the………为了…
表因果:therefore因此,所有/ so 所以
表例证:for example
表假设:if 如果
表让步:although…虽然……(注意:后不可接but!虽然但是不可这样连用)/of course 当然…/clearly…显然…
相关的过渡语常见的有以下几种:
表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later,first of all, finally, at last…
表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…
表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise…
表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus…
表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of…
表示并列关系: and, as well as, also…
表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude
5.巧妙变换句式
例如:I think that...... 宾语从句,是考生最常使用的句式。如果变换成另一种句式I have a thought that......同位语从句,立刻让人眼前一亮,为作文平添光彩。
还比如:I hear that也是很多考生常用的句式。如果换成It is reported that...... 或者There is a piece of news that 同样的意思,却明显体现出了考生知识运用的差距。后者明显分数会!
开头常用万能句子
1.Depending on personal experience, personal type and emotion concern, we find that some people hold the idea of..., while others prefer...
基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同,我们发现有人持……的观点,而另外一些人则更喜欢……
例句:Depending on personal experience, personal type and emotion concern, we find that some people hold the idea of living in the small town, while others prefer the big city.
基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同,我们发现有人喜欢生活在小城镇,而另外一些人则更喜欢大城市。
2.When asked about..., the vast/ overwhelming majority of/ most/ many/ quite a few people say/ think/ believe/ answer that... But...
当被问及……时,多数(大多数、许多)人认为(回答)……但是……
例句:When asked about choosing living place, the vast people think that living in the big city is perfect. But I think living in the small town is the better choice.
当被问及在选择居住地方时,多数人认为居住在城市是很棒的。但是我觉得住在小城镇更好。
3.When it comes to ..., some think/ hold/ believe...
当提及……时,有人认为……
例句:When it comes to sports, some believe basketball is the most popular one.
当提到运动时,有人认为篮球是最受欢迎的。
4.It has become apparent to us that...
对我们来说,……已经变得很明显了
例句:It has become apparent to us that living in a small town is more comfortable.
对我们来说,住在小城镇更加舒服。
5.Nowadays, it is commonly/ widely/ generally believed/ thought/ held that..., but I wonder/ doubt that...
如今,人们普遍认为……,但是我怀疑……
例句:Nowadays, it is generally believed that living in a big city is convenient, but I doubt that living in a small country is more comfortable.
如今,人们普遍认为住在大城市更便利,但是我觉得住在小城镇更加舒服。
6.With the rapid growth of..., ...have/has become increasingly important in our daily life.
随着……的增长,……日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。
例如:With the rapid growth of hi-tech skills, cellphone has become increasingly important in our daily life.
随着高科技的增长,手机在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。
7.Recently the issue/ problem of...has been brought into focus/ brought to public attention/ in the limelight/ posed among the public.
近来,……的问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。
例句:Recently the issue of studying abroad has been brought into focus.
近来,出过留学的问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。
8.One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is...
人们热烈讨论的话题之一就是……
例句:One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is going abroad for study.
人们热烈讨论的话题之一就是出国留学。
结尾常用万能句子
1.From above...
综上所述……
例句:From above, I think living in a big city is better.
综上所述,我认为居住在大城市是更好的。
2.Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that...
因此,不难得出以下结论……
例句:Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that living in a big city is better.
因此,不难得出居住在大城市更好的结论。
3.In a word, the whole society should pay close to the problem of... only in this way can...in the future.
总之,全社会都应该密切关注……,只有这样将来才能……
例句:In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of protecting the environment. only in this way can we have a good place to live in the future.
总之,全社会都应该密切关注环境保护问题,只有这样将来我们才能有一个生存的好地方。
4.To be sure, there may be difficulties we cannot overcome, but if we...
确实,有些困难我们无法克服,但如果我们能够……的话,……。
例句:To be sure, there may be difficulties we cannot overcome, but if we work hard, we can figure out another way to solve the problem.
确实,有些困难我们无法克服,但如果我们能够努力的话,我们就可以找到解决问题的另一种方法。
5.Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that...
考虑到所有因素,我们得出结论,……
例句:Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that study hard is good to us.
考虑到所有因素,我们得出结论好好学习对我们是有好处的。
6.In summary/ conclusion/ a word,...
总之……
例句:In summary, we should study hard.
总之,我们要好好学习。
7.As mentioned above,...
综上所述……
例句:As mentioned above, living in the small town is more comfortable.
综上所述,居住在小城镇更加的舒适。
8.Therefore, we have no reason to make a fuss about All in all,...
所以我们没有理由为……大惊小怪。总之,……
例句:Therefore, we have no reason to make a fuss about artificial intelligence. All in all, artificial intelligence will be more and more common in the future.
所以我们没有理由为人工智能大惊小怪。总之,未来人工智能会越来越普遍。
文章中常用句子
1. Apart from this, other ways/ aspects/functions are...
除此之外,另外一些方法(方面、作业)是……
例句:Besides, other ways are also under considered.
除此之外,其他方法也是在考虑中。
2.The last but not the least is...
最后但并非不重要的是……
例句:The last but not the least is that we should get up early.
最后但并非不重要的是我们要早起。
3.On the one hand,...,on the other hand,...
一方面……,另一方面……
例句:On the one hand, we need to be helpful, on the other hand, we should be on the alert to protect ourselves.
一方面我们要乐于助人,另一方面我们要加强警惕保护自己。
4.No less important/ harmful is...
同样重要(有害)
例句:No less important is saving water.
节约用水也是同样重要的。
5.But, you may ask, why is...important/ indispensable/ necessary?
但你也许会问,为什么……很重要(必不可少、有必要)?
例句:But, you may ask, why is water important?
但你也许会问,为什么水很重要?
6.Nothing/ Few things can approach/ equal/ match/ parallel...
没有什么能与……相比
例句:Nothing can approach my pet dog.
没有什么能与我的宠物狗相比。
7.Despite the fact that most of them like..., I would like to choose...
尽管大部分人喜欢……,我还是倾向于……
例句:Despite the fact that most of them like swimming, I would like to choose running.
尽管大部分人喜欢游泳,我还是倾向于跑步。
8.People differ greatly on their attitudes towards this problem. Some maintain that... Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that... Personally, I stand on the side of...
人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有人坚持认为……与此相反,有人认为……就我个人而言,我站在……这一边。
例句:People differ greatly on their attitudes towards this problem. Some maintain that living in the big city is better. Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that living in the small country is better. Personally, I stand on the side of the latter.
人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有人坚持认为居住在大城市比较好。与此相反,有人认为小城镇比较好。就我个人而言,我站在后者这一边。
9.To understand the truth of..., it is necessary to analyze...
为了了解……的真相,有必要分析……
例句:To understand the truth of air pollution, it is necessary to analyze automobile exhaust.
为了了解大气污染的真相,有必要对汽车尾气进行分析。
10.Different people have different opinions/ views/ ideas about... Some people take it for granted that... On the contrary, some other people think...
对于……的观点因人而异。有人想当然的认为……相反,有人则认为……
例句:Different people have different opinion about choosing living place. Some people take it for granted that big city is better. On the contrary, some other people think small town is the perfect choice.
对于居住地的选择因人而异。有人想当然的认为大城市更好。相反,有人则认为小城镇是最好的选择。
11.We have been brought up believe /myth that... Yet...
我们从下到大都相信这种说法……然而……
例句:We have been brought up believe that study is the most important thing. Yet playing is also very important.
我们从小到大都相信学习是最重要的这种说法。然而玩耍也是很重要的。
12.Given the fact that..., it by no means indicates that...
尽管……是事实,但是并不意味着……
例句:Given the fact that book is important, it by no means indicates that it is everything.
尽管书籍很重要是事实,但是并不意味着书就是一切。
13.Some reasons can explain this trend. First of all,... Secondly..., Furthermore,...
一些原因可以解释这一趋势。首先,……;其次,……;另外,……
例句:Some reasons can explain this trend. First of all, air pollution is more and more common. Secondly, water is also polluted. Furthermore,animals are in danger.
一些原因可以解释这一趋势。首先,大气污染越来越严重;其次,水资源也被污染了;另外很多动物也濒临灭绝。
14.Thanks to/ Owing to/ Due to/ Because of/ As a result of
因为……
例句:Thanks to my mom, I become an excellent person.
因为我妈妈,我成为了一个优秀的人。
15.There are many reasons explaining this case. As for me, I consider the following as the typical ones. To begin with,... Secondly,... Last but not least,...
有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而已,我认为以下原因比较典型。一个是……;第二个是……;最后,……
例句:There are many reasons explaining this case. As for me, I consider the following as the typical ones. To begin with, air pollution. Secondly,water pollution. Last but not least, ocean pollution..
有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而已,我认为以下原因比较典型。一个是大气污染;第二个是水污染;最后是海洋污染。
16.No one can deny the fact that...
没有人可以否认……的事实。
例句:No one can deny the fact that we are brothers.
没有人可以否认我们是兄弟的事实。
17.Legend/ Rumor has it that...
据说……
例句:Rumor has it that they have got married.
据说他们已经结婚了。
18.People are coming to realize the importance of... They have begun to try their best to... We believe that...
人们开始意识到……的重要性,正竭力……。我们相信……
例句:People are coming to realize the importance of science. They have begun to try their best to work on science. We believe that science will make our life better.
人们开始意识到科学的重要性,正竭力钻研科学。我们相信科学会使我们的生活更美好。
19.Anyway...
不管怎么样……
例句:Anyway, we are brothers.
不管怎么样,我们都是兄弟。
20.We should try our best to overcome/ conquer the difficulties.
我们要竭尽全力克服困难。
谚语
1.Knowledge is power.
知识就是力量。
2.Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
教育是一个逐步发现自己无知的过程。
3.Unpolished pearls never shine.
玉不琢,不成器。
4.A young idler, an old beggar.
少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
5.Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.
天才就是努力和勤奋。
6.There is a skeleton in every house.
家家都有本难念的经。
7.The value of a man should be seen in what he gives and not in what he is able to receive.
一个人的价值应该在于他贡献什么,而不是他能获得什么。
8.The best preparation for good work tomorrow is to do good work today.
为把明天的工作坐好,最好的准备是把今天的工作坐好。
9.The house of everyone is to him as his castle and fortress.
家是一个人的城堡。
10.Good health is over wealth.
健康是最大的财富
11.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
早睡早起身体好。
12.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
13.Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
世上无难事只怕有心人
14.Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.
近朱者赤近墨者黑
15.A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.
吃一堑长一智



